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by Paradox
Wed Aug 27, 2014 7:03 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

You see this is what I'm talking about. Investment. Some may think that this is just a bit of space porn but readers invest in the characters here! I don't tend to want people dead by by lord lummy when Jake was through. I could have happily danced on his grave. I had to play Jake very carefully......
by Paradox
Wed Aug 27, 2014 6:40 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

Phew! That was a bit of a chest pounder - in both a heart hammering and fist beating sort of way. This was a long chapter Worth every extra line :D Just a bit of feedback - keep an eye on the number of commas (here's an example) - "My little Spitfire, tend to get a bit excited, when we are in battl...
by Paradox
Tue Aug 26, 2014 11:47 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

Chapter 47 – The Blacks Meet An Angel.

This was a long chapter, and definitely different from my usual! I think it turned out rather good!
by Paradox
Mon Aug 25, 2014 1:16 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

Sorry for not posting as often anymore. I have started a new job (at least for now), so it's keeping me a bit busy. No worries mate.. had a feeling it was something like that. :wink: Ya, better than the Goodwill job by a mile or three, but still runs my old butt off. I move cars around a 30 acre au...
by Paradox
Mon Aug 25, 2014 1:13 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

Chapter 46 - A Wedding And More. You seem to have Terra handing something back to Spitfire twice... (once before packing, and once before take-off) - Neelix Thank you Neelix! I re-wrote that section about three times, and that seems to have gotten overlooked. I also forgot to replace JOP with Justi...
by Paradox
Mon Aug 25, 2014 3:23 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

Chapter 46 - A Wedding And More.

Sorry for not posting as often anymore. I have started a new job (at least for now), so it's keeping me a bit busy.
by Paradox
Wed Aug 20, 2014 1:53 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

Chapter 44 - It's All In The Family.

Go ye forth, my loyal readers, and partake thy selves thereof! And may thou receiveth pleasure from it in the fullness of time!
by Paradox
Tue Aug 19, 2014 5:06 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

And for what may well be the most OMGWTF Mary Sue of them all, :twisted: see: http://interrobangstudios.com/comics-display.php?strip_id=989 http://interrobangstudios.com/comics-display.php?strip_id=1645 Last panel..... doki doki kawaii.... can someone please inform me as to what the hell I'm lookin...
by Paradox
Tue Aug 19, 2014 1:42 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

Heh. Anthropology's not really my subject, but I really don't believe that any majority culture in the world has ever had girls like this be the rule, self-righteous, moral majorities or whatever notwithstanding. An enjoyable fantasy, but while I'm wishing, I'll have my own private spaceship and a ...
by Paradox
Tue Aug 19, 2014 1:36 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

Captain Gary Stu and Miss Fanservice For what is probably the definitive summing up of both, see: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MarySue and http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MartyStu And for what may well be the most OMGWTF Mary Sue of them all, :twisted: see: http://interroba...
by Paradox
Tue Aug 19, 2014 1:33 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

Hiya, 1) Satanism in D&D and rock music: As I hear it, if you play a certain Justin Bieber song backwards you will hear a message from Satan urging you to commit ritual suicide. Even worse, if you play it forwards you will hear a song by Justin Bieber. :lol: Too funny! };] 2) Captain Gary Stu and M...
by Paradox
Tue Aug 19, 2014 3:31 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

I wish I could do more renders like that, but that simple picture took an entire day to do. The program froze up my computer twice. Then the render itself took well over an hour to do. Not sure what your screen resolution is, but mine is only 1280x768. I rendered that at 1920x1080 as I figured that...
by Paradox
Tue Aug 19, 2014 3:08 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoot"
Replies: 438
Views: 103807

Re: "The Adventures of Captain Morgan" Or "Damn That Mossfoo

Sorry Pdx, wrong choice of words earlier; I meant to say "...while you're online" - as you were when I wrote the post. I would have been disappointed (along with many others) if you had 'gone'. Ah! Okay. And thank you again for all your support and advice! Caught up with the story. Love the line ab...