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by my ammo crate
Mon Jun 13, 2016 6:33 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Part 10

I'm starting to get busy again so I'm going to have to dial back updates to once every two weeks. To whoever's still following this, I hope it doesn't bother you too much.
by my ammo crate
Mon May 30, 2016 6:31 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

by my ammo crate
Wed May 25, 2016 6:37 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

by my ammo crate
Mon May 16, 2016 6:48 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

part 7

Trying to stick to weekly updates this time.
by my ammo crate
Mon May 09, 2016 6:39 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Part 6

...and we're back.

Apologies for the sudden and long absence, plenty of real life to keep me busy.
by my ammo crate
Mon Mar 14, 2016 6:45 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Updated part 5.
by my ammo crate
Mon Mar 07, 2016 6:52 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Part 4's posted. Good writing advice there, thanks. I'll do my best to cut down on unnecessary words, though I doubt I can catch them all. As for the jumpy narration, that's a bit harder to pin down. Not something that can be easily fixed with a spellchecker :lol: . Still, I'll try to keep a tighter...
by my ammo crate
Mon Feb 29, 2016 2:33 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Here's part 3. Well, I haven't heard from anyone since I started this, and it feels a little...strange? Honestly I'm not sure how to describe it, but I can tell you it doesn't feel great. I realize that this is nowhere near grade-A writing (and that's why I'm not a professional writer) and not much ...
by my ammo crate
Mon Feb 22, 2016 3:03 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Part 2 is now up.

I've barely started, and I can begin to see why people normally don't put everything all clumped up together...this is going to be one long page. Ho boy.
by my ammo crate
Tue Feb 16, 2016 12:55 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Part 12
by my ammo crate
Tue Feb 16, 2016 12:54 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Part 11
by my ammo crate
Tue Feb 16, 2016 12:54 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Part 10 Citadel City, Aerater planetary surface “I feel disgusting.” That was a fairly blunt statement nobody disagreed with. Rex sniffed the air, then lifted the dirty breastplate he was using as armour up to his nose to take a good whiff. “I smell…singed.” Jacob glanced at him, and he recognized ...
by my ammo crate
Tue Feb 16, 2016 12:53 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Part 9 Citadel City, Aerater planetary surface Combat boots crunched against dry sand while gunfire crackled, popping shots from a distance. Bolts slammed into nearby surfaces which sent bits and pieces airborne before they showered back down. “Contact! Left side, on the roof!” There was a sudden b...
by my ammo crate
Tue Feb 16, 2016 12:53 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Part 8 Aerater system space The Horizon arrived seconds after the other ships, and was treated with a clear view of the ongoing skirmish. The fleet was busy cleaning up survivors from the Rigeti attack and the combined efforts of the frigates and Vipers swiftly shot down the handful of fighters. On...
by my ammo crate
Tue Feb 16, 2016 12:53 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: The Rebellious Three
Replies: 24
Views: 13231

Re: The Rebellious Three

Part 7 Rigeti system space The behemoth lazily circled the planet once more while its pirate escorts followed in a rough V formation. Patrols were dull, routine and unexciting. The crew of the behemoth were itching to use the craft’s broadsides for more than just intimidation, but the monarchy insi...